Reviews for When the Sun Rises
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I love this feeling. Very well-expressed.
Broken but Beautiful chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
/('o')\ That was amazing! Great work! I loved it!
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
this is beautiful, nice useage of an every day elimante were all firmulre with to draw us back to something so pure and mostly forgotten, beautiful job.
th3craft3r chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
I love this poem :) It feels so warm... and I agree, the sunrise symbolizes new beginnings :)
ahorizonforthenewbirds chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I think this is brilliant. You've honestly expressed how I feel when I look at the sunrise! I love how you describe it as both a time of reflecting on the old times and thinking of the new up ahead. That's beautiful :) The last two sentences are amazing too, but my favourites are these: "It's so beautiful that it hurts / So peaceful you can't imagine heartache / And so powerful it lets you free." Incredible and completely honest. I love it!
YuePantera chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I loved this! It's really well written and it has some great imagery! I loved the hope and the ending line. X
Water Balloon chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
So very deep! I especially love the dramatics and trueness of the last two lines. Also, nice use of repetition. I am interested in reading more of your work. And I have a question: Where where were you when you wrote the poem and how were you feeling?