Reviews for Everlasting
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
cool I love snakes and wish I had a snake of my own. I have snake pendants am in slytherin and just LOVE the way of the snake
Felrain chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Very creative and nicely done.
LifeAfterDeath53 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I loved the full loop you made here! Very creepy, loved it!
If Dreams Came True chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
This was . . . wow. It was creepy but really good. You really had this as a dream? Was it scary then too? Really good and desriptive. I loved it.
TinfoilKnight chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
...aand we go from nature imagery to a creepy-ass snake story. Internet people are so unpredictable. You have snakes? Lucky. Snakes are cool.

Oh, who am I kidding, I don't have any criticism. I like the way the girl turned into a snake at the end, it gives the story that ominous cycle feeling. The ending was spot-on. I like the pleasure the main character seemed to feel in killing her victim, it made it all the creepier.
Austin F chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Very creepy, you do a very good job with the descriptions.