Reviews for and the world spins madly on
Naver chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I like this, though I do not get a feel of a poem.. but this is a good piece of writing! :)

For a poem maybe sum the ideas, relate them to objects, and space lines..
(then again maybe you prefer this..)

Continue to write!
YuePantera chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I like this a lot! I never thought of it quite like this before and it certainly has got me thinking! Good work on this. :)