|Reviews for Fire|
| AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Oh dear! Have you ever read Yeats Crazy Jane poems? Check out the use of soul and whole there- or have you already? Having read this- I now crave alcohol among other things, lol!
| XiaanRei chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Short and simple, tells a story in few words, great job.
| Utada Rumiko chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Short, simple, and very good. Makes me wonder what this desire is that a woman cannot be whole without. Good job.