Reviews for Perfect
ensconced chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Wow! This was really deep and dark, but so real and beautiful. You touched on an issue that gets everyone. Great job :)

Christine
eatyourparents1001 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
woah. that was amazing. i really love your writing, i can identify with the things that you write about, its soo good :)
itsjel chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
while reading this for some reason I just want to give you a hug but, the poem is perfect.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Very very nice. I love the emotions surging throughout this poem. Awesome job, keep it up .
Austin F chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I love dark poems, and I love them even more when they have a strong message such as this.
YuePantera chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
This was very well written. I kept chanting it in my head. It has a really hard effect on the reader and your imagery is really well done. Good work! X
Tepid Waters chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
This is excellent :-) I love it!
Utada Rumiko chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
A dark, but beautiful poem backed up by a powerful message. Great job.
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I have read many poems on this subject area but the rhyme scheme and rhythm emphasised the emotion, a wonderful piece.

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