|Reviews for Thief|
| Too lazy to login chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
(Even thought it's not working)
Ok, this was really amazing, and you could totally put it to music and make it work.
Could you please and to it so I can call it a song?
With a cherry on top?
What if I get on my knees and beg?
| we've got obsessions chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
i can really relate to this.
the parenthesis between the main stanzas create such an amazing effect. i loved the line "and you can't touch it but i take from you when you're not looking". so powerful.