Reviews for Alone
Michaela Jolene chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Reading this I had a flash back to Walk Alone by oh some rock band I dont rememeber, any how great poem. Your point, I see.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
"the day has me long beat,

even before the sun rises.

with the sleepless nights

with my thoughts intruding

with my heart and head broken.

the Demon has won.

because i am alone."

I love those lines 3 Also, the whole poem was just lovely, and you did a great job expressing loneliness. Amazing, keep it up .