Reviews for Farewell
True Talker chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I read this and it had made me think. Also, in another way for some reason earlier today I thought of this line I had once heard (when really there was no reason for it). Actually I had thought of it wrong I thought of it earlier as; You have been weighed and measured. - When really I think that was an error in my memories. Why did I type my mistake here? Because your line here - "You have been judged and forgiven." - For some reason it had reminded me of it. Now, it bugs me that I can't think of the proper way to say it. SERIOUSLY it does.
StarburstAwesomeness chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
The first chapter kept me very interested and was well-written, but make sure when you have many people speaking you say who is speaking so the reader can understand the story better. If it' important, you should also describe a little bit of the setting. But in the end, it's your story, so do what you want with it! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! :)