|Reviews for One day, soon|
| a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
beautiful, "I am under the sun and on the grass and surrounded by half-strangers" - chills. love it, keep up the fabulous work.
| savor those enticing dreams chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
i really appreciate the way you played up the idea of halves in this little chunk of writing. it's true, what you said, and i like the bittersweet feeling of it all.
i think this would be good if you messed with the structure a little and made it a little more poetic. just a suggestion.