Reviews for Stop
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Wow. What great words you chose for this piece! It is quite somber, yet the words express your feelings completely. This world is unforgiving, causing pain that few will recognize, let alone understand. This world stops for no one, constantly claiming its victims; I feel this piece presents that concept very well. Incredible work, keep it up! :)

As always, keep writing!

Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
This is good, and sad reminds me of a terrible time in my life about a year and a half ago. Good job.

Keep writing,

Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
A poem that is so true as well as sad. Amazing job, keep it up .