I'm not a fan of explicitly romantic stories (I prefer romance to be the subplot), but oh, I love twisted clichés and tropes so much! This is quite good.

I TO-TA-LY LOOOOOVE THIS AWESOME;Y CUTE STORY plus i looove cliches

I don't like stories where the guy is younger, but Martin is so cute!

goshhhhhhhhhhhhh good one

'Oh, persuade me he did.' Oh, okay then... WOOP WOOP! It's getting quite hot in here! LOL, I'm just acting weird.

If younger guys are as sweet as martin, i wouldn't mind being a craddle snatcher. ;)

I loved this..I've been reading these stories lately to try and help me figure out the scenarios that will prolly happen since I'm kind of in the same situation except my best friend and her younger don't know my feelings..
Anyways. This was cute and it made me happy ]

I love this! It's a cute, simple story that put a smile on my face. Even though it was short, there was enough background to show the feelings of the characters and make them believable.

lol thats hilarious! i love how backward it is! so awesome. martin is so adorable, i just wanna pinch his little cheekies:P.

That was amazing

Loved it!

This is an awesome spin on the cliches.

I like it. A lot. As in; I'm-going-to-add-it-to-my-favorites sort of like. Yeah, the backwards cliche was kind of refreshing, and the fact that the character addressed that is great too.

awww:D this was so cute, plus i liked that it was all 'backwards' to what we're used ti in cinema and literature... good job!

sooooo cute. I loved it

Omg that was so adorable lol

I like your headstrong female character and Martin is just really adorable. Keep up the good work :)