Reviews for Valley of the Wind
xxxyx chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Heya! When reviewing other people's works, I always start with the oldest, so... here goes!

A pure, endless valley of scenery and wind behind golden gates... did I sum it right?

But... it's so vague, more about feelings than visualization (i.e. describing the scenery)! But then, it is poetry, and I guess that is what makes this poem what it is. So, in a way, you leave every reader to interpret and visualize his or her own imagining of The Valley of the Wind.

Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Sounds like heaven.

Very good job, I loved it.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Well I only wish this valley exsisted xD Amazing poem, that is done ectreamly well. Keep it up .