Reviews for Time in a Catholic Country
riley6441 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I really like this poem, maybe make it into a story?
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
This is so unique and interesting. The story you tell is deep to say the least.I really enjoyed this. Keep writing!
sprinkled clean chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
I love this poem because you formed the ideas so well that it's almost like a fairy tale for some reason. It has that edge that just draws me in, I don't know how to explain it, but the way you describe the scenes and somehow add the moon to each part is nice. There's a lot of ironic thoughts in it, but it enlightens me more as a whole.

"I say the moon is a communion wafer

a child pocketed and brought home," - my favourite lines... a great comparison, actually (:
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I love the language you used in this poem it really emphasises the story. The last line is brilliant a wonderful comparison! If I were you though I might reconsider the K rating, maybe make it T to be on the safe side?