Oh! I loved it! It was so great. You had my heart in my throat over that phone call. It's a shame Marise didn't die in a fiery crash : ) Thanks for sharing.

sounds like they're gonna wear each other out! great job.

great chapter.

Ah...house call!

very interesting...

I think I read this before, but I'm happy to give it another go because I cant remember for sure. Anyway, I'm intrigued. Poor Mr. J.

Great start!

Im always more emotional in the wee hours of the morning, but I've got tears in my eyes for Clay. Poor Clay.

That last bit? About your characters talking to you? Mine don't, but they sort of do. I know, I'm so eloquent. By the way, I really like this story so far.

OMG I squeed so hard! I love it and am going to go read the sequel right now. This story is amazing and you are amazing.

FREAKING LOVE THIS!

I enjoyed this. It's difficult to find decent teacher/student stories. I think that's because it's a sort of taboo subject, but it's just fiction so who cares?

I got some laughs out of it and it made me sad at times, so that's good. Nice range of emotions.

The only complaint I have is that twice (that I noticed) you spelled 'senior' with a c instead of an s. And let's be honest; compared to some of the stories on this site, that is an extremely minor mistake.

That's all I have to say really. Great job!

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi

So good! Thank you for the epilogue!

I wish him luck with that seduction! See how it goes n' stuff! Thanks for smut! Most readers are too afraid to write smut because our pal FP is deleting stories! I love PWP, but I love PoWitPlot better!

Your writing is beautiful! Its details are beautiful! I have fallen in love with your writing! Keep up the good work! And I hope you write more stories

Phenomenal.

Not even sure I spelled that correctly. But this story cannot be explained or described in more words. Now, obviously, it's not on par with many I've read. But as far as content and subject matter, Illicit is beautiful and well above its class. Nice job.