|Reviews for Imperfections|
| LovelySocks chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Very, very well done! You clearly state how you feel, with good reasons. I can feel Sara's frustration and confusion. There's conflict in the fact that Sara doesn't WANT to be jealous, but she just can't help it. I think everyone can feel like this sometimes. Maybe you could continue this, possibly from Tara's point of view. You know, to show that even she has imprefections. Just an idea, because you clearly have something great going already with Sara as the narator. :) Really, really good.
| KatieMichelle chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Fascinating concept and interestingly enough, I don't think I like Tara. Take that as a compliment, though - your characters are well written. Their personalities are diverse.
Well written. Update soon!