Reviews for Vanity
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Very nice poem that is truly sad. Great job with the emotions, keep it up .
KatieMichelle chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I think this is the best poem I've read on this site yet (and I believe I JUST read another one of yours? haha!).

Vaniy had always been a subject I find myself constantly pondering, and it's not quite MY OWN vanity that gets me, which makes the POV you chose so much more interesting.

The speaker seems to be masking something here. There are always a million ways to interpret potry, though, huh?