Reviews for The Unread Letter
Lisa chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Your writing has never been so clearly representative of your feelings as it was in this story. Through your imagery, I could feel the pain of the main character. This girl is holding onto so many hopes, but had to let them go. I can sympathize with her from the way you brought out her inner thoughts. Her yearning for this boy seems to breach the happiness she once had with him. If I could make one recommendation, try to watch some of the present and past tenses, but otherwise, it's golden. I never knew you could write so passionately like this, Ciance (I love how your name is like "science" by the way). You clearly captured the desires of a broken-hearted teenage girl. Keep up the story. I can't wait to read the rest! :)