Reviews for Waiting
Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
This is really good! I like the flow to it! Keep it up!
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Very nice poem. A bit sad, but it truly touched my heart. I felt as if I could connect to this poem. Amazing job, keep it up :D
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I hardly know these people, but boy do I love them.

You know imagery. You write it wonderfully. I am in awe of your skill.
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
I loved the imagery in "spring splintering alive" but I got to say, the endig "How much he's growing despite all my flaws" kind of confused me. The way he speaks about his pain, his anger, and his sensitivity, you'd think it'd be his flaws. (though those aren't really flaws per say but they do make one unattractive in my eyes)
sprinkled clean chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
The enjambment is great, and it flows well. Your descriptions are simple yet they just stick to me in a good way (: