Reviews for Sincere Apology
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Very lovely. What a sincere apology. Amazing, keep it up .
creativitykiller chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I know it's a poem, but I got bored after the first three lines. Even in poetry, I feel like there has to be something to pull you in, like a symbol. Either that or really short. The poem, to me, felt like pros split into verse (which I guess poetry is, but still). It was really litteral, and did not actually make me feel any emotion other than boredom (really, I'm not saying that to be mean). Why are you using a dialect? What does it add to the poem?
Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Amazing story...

Loved it,