Reviews for Labyrinthine
jaybeeuk chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Wow this is sounding really interesting,

the mixture of dialogue and short sentences makes it nice and fast paced

Really good for a beginning, but i would like to know some more about the characters in the next chapter

Update soon! Am interested to see what is happening here.
Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Good job.