Reviews for The Painting
M3rcy chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
Cool twist!
neenziee chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I love the dark element you put in this!
BlackPantiesWithAnAngelsFace chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
I loved the way you kept referring back to the woman's eyes. It showed how much they bothered the narrator. I was expecting it to end differently, but I still really liked it. Nice work!

TwistedTeddyBear chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Thanks everyone! I appreciate the feedback . I didn't think it was all good or anyone would get it but i seemed to have worried for nothing :'D And yeah some people tell me my stories end up being dark, i guess i should start writing love stories ;;Lol
Austin F chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Very cool story, I love the idea of this.
Dr. Shadow chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Cool story. Like the use of the way it keeps on circling through the same plot over and over... I really liked it!
Whatsoever chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Haha wow this is a cool story. Kind of dark, actually all dark, but thrilling. Me likie.
Naga-Hunter chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Stories like this inspire me. 3