Reviews for Ava
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
I adore the line about not leaving her/his destiny unpolished. What a beautiful image. This flowed really well and was a wonderful read.
agrader chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Sometimes I wish these were written about me.
Thousand Writer chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Mailbox of your soul. I feel like using that in one of my pieces lol. Nice work overall!
I can see this poem going two ways: a woman thinking of God or a woman thinking of her lover.

Sounds like she's longing to be better and hoping he will notice and to eventually reach that ultimate land. I wish Ava the best in reaching that true potential.
BangxDitto chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
There are so many lines in here that I love...
I just love the way you use the english language!
It's beauty, pure beauty.
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/29/2012

This one achieves a touching intimacy. Lovely.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Excellent work, as usual. "...before I place this soliloque into the mailbox of your soul..." Breathtaking lines like that make a great poem awesome.

Keep it up!
Amanda Catarina chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Wonderful words! I liked so much. So much...

Especially that: (...) God created scorching days to remind us that we don't want to end up in hell"

Excellent poem! _

Amanda M. Lynn chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
I love this poem. As usual, you never fail to impress me. The description you gave is great too. I'm actually inspired to explore the topic myself. :-) Keep up the good work!