Reviews for The tall dark stranger
Tla.N.Harmonee chapter 4 . 5/29/2012
Aya, at first sounds like she wanted to give in to him, Bastian sounds like a creepy person. Is he African? Well, love it so far, can't wait to see what happens.
Alaeryel chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
I am really enjoying this story! Will be watching for more!
Tla.N.Harmonee chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
Wow, it was hot in the beginning, but didnt expect that ending. Keep it up.
Tla.N.Harmonee chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
Wow this story's starting to heat up, glad you continued. Wanna hear more, keep it up.
Tla.N.Harmonee chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
I like the concept of this story, however there's a lot of grammar and sentence structure mistakes.
Amy Cullen chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
OMGGGGGGGGGGG this is really good Write more and Bastian sounds really hot