|Reviews for My Magical Ceiling|
| FreakShow97 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
:) cool poem
| MoonstoneRoses chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
very nice :) i've spent many nights staring up at my popcorn ceiling seeing shapes haha
| kkbadoo chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
This is simply awesome!
| nffhkasjfnbsdkjb chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
The first four lines are really lovely Good job.
'ridden' though stopped the flow for me for a moment (it made me think of to be 'rode' where you mean to be 'rid of') so my only suggestion is to maybe think a way round that one...?