Reviews for The Setting Sun
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This is a beautiful poem.. Sort of depressing but when it's sunset jump over the moon on a cow and start a new life. :)
my.life.is.over chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
This is truly beautiful and quite depressing. I really like it. (I'm quite the depressing person, so you should be honored.) :P But, really. Good job. (I also came to read your stuff because of Hi98Productions, so thank him when you get the chance)
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Way to describe abuse without coming out and SAYING it's abuse. Saying the word "abuse" is like saying the word "bullying", it's so stereotyped and hard to relate too.

This doesn't happed to you, does it? I feel like I have to ask that. It seems so real.

I think this is my favorite poem of yours.

-REB
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
That was depressing. I like how you clearly explained that people talk of the beauty of the sunset, as anyone would, but then you explain why you don't in the following lines. I especially like the last two lines. Keep writing more, they're improving.