Reviews for The Fray chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Also written very well. You left room for translation, and i liked it. Keep up the good work. :)
thisaccountisclosedthanksbye chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Really beautiful poem. I loved the line 'you would look me/Straight in the eye, and further through', really simple but effective :) Nice job.

AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This was really sweet but equally sad. I liked it alot :-D great poem - as always :-D Great piece