Reviews for Over the Years
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
I like the emotion flowing through out the whole poem. I hope this is fiction because then it would be kind of sad.
KiraDebia13 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
It's nice, i still feel the lost, the sadness, every flavor that you add to this great story. i feel like i'm the main character, who separated with his childhood friend and now like a complete strangers. how sad... but it's good!
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
This was really good. You can definitely feel how hurt the character is for loosing their loved ones, and all for not keeping in touch. It is sad, but nevertheless brilliantly written. I loved every bit of it. Also I hummed this in a tune in my head, and it worked! :D Very much like a song; maybe you should turn it into one? ;) Very fine work, I hope you continue to do so. :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni