Reviews for The Patriot
CEE2027 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Yet another brilliant story. I see you have an interest in the emergence of AI.

Your writing is top-notch - there's nothing I would suggest or change. The theme is apparent yet the reader isn't bludgeoned by it. What if we, as humans with all our human flaws, do not recognize rudimentary AI when it finally self-develops?

There are also several layers of meaning that I won't delve into in the interests of space, but overall I'll say that this story is fantastic.