Reviews for Green apples ape the symmetry of a cracked bowl
SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
I love this, really interesting imagery created here!
YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
'She doesn't trust herself

to understand the complexities of reality.'

I can vouch for this myself. Though not the most transparent of imagery, I like the way they roll off your verses.

'Green apples app

the symmetry of a cracked bowl,

the crystal so hollow that it sings

in lavish gulps of idolatry.'

I took this literally at first, and then thought of the other, more symbolic, Apple and its accompanying apps. I don't know, but the latter seems to fit it better in my interpretation of this piece.