|Reviews for Green apples ape the symmetry of a cracked bowl|
| SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
I love this, really interesting imagery created here!
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
'She doesn't trust herself
to understand the complexities of reality.'
I can vouch for this myself. Though not the most transparent of imagery, I like the way they roll off your verses.
'Green apples app
the symmetry of a cracked bowl,
the crystal so hollow that it sings
in lavish gulps of idolatry.'
I took this literally at first, and then thought of the other, more symbolic, Apple and its accompanying apps. I don't know, but the latter seems to fit it better in my interpretation of this piece.