|Reviews for Static|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
The beginning is cool. It's a different concept to me sounds and pictures that don't make a meaning. I also liked the contrast between the two picture options. Very powerful.
The ending, I didn't quite get. It was confusing to me. Are the sounds and lights part of a dream? And the word repercussions is an odd one. It made it hard for me to get an idea of why you didn't want to tell them. Was it fear? Shame?
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| ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Beautiful. I really liked how it was fragmented, so that it didn't flow perfectly and wasn't completely logical, just like static :)