Oh nooo damn homophobia, it was getting cute too! I dig the comedy like routine going on between Krystal and the demon lol. The demon's plan to bring the two girls together was peak boredom and have nothing else to do feels as well lmao

I was wondering how an attractive person gets mistaken for a boy.. the next paragraph immediately answered my question lol yeah clothes can hide a lot of things. The one liners throughout the chapter gave me a good chuckle too. kudos

THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT READ OH MY GOD I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT AND NOW I AM HEADING OFF TO THE SEQUEL! I REALLY LOVED IT, THE WRITING, THE CHARACTERS, EVERYTHING!

Also, so glad that once again, this was already complete when I started reading it! I would have died waiting for those chapters! Suspense and more suspense, annoying cliffhangers on cliffhangers. I don't know how others could have handled that.

I HAD A FEELING WITH INFERNO BUT I WAS LIKE "NAH UNLESS TWO GIRLS CAN MAKE A BABY, WHICH COULD BE POSSIBLE BUT UNLIKELY AND Y'KNOW" BUT DAMN IT ALL MAKES SENSE
BUT WOW EVERYONE HAS A GAY SIDE I KNEW IT

BUT WHAT THE FUCK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER THE LAST ONE NO FUCKING WAY WHAT SHALL I DO

Since it's nearing the end I wonder if a certain purple eyed exorcised fiend has anything in her that can change the course of what's happening? ;) Wishful thinking but come on, when she woke up, why the fuck did you have to make it like this, and she was snuggling with her, I just man come on!

Although, I'm hoping that the other purple eyed chaos demon will show her stuff because damn, I want to see it all. Especially with Tycara saying she always held back, just how strong could she be?

OH AND THE LIVING INFERNO - WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO US

YO WHAT THE FUCK YOU FUCKING CUNT WHAT THE FUCK WHY WHAT HOW FUCKING DAARE OYUREJN WRHNESJGVLndxcjkgnvfzk/jbmf,;.m,c gf,dk mbk,mfbvlkdmx/lbvdxk,mv .d,lxcm

"Mommy, you said the boogeyman wasn't real!"

I love the comedic things you throw in and it all just flows together so nicely. I am so glad I came across this story!

I love these lesbian kidnappers, quite the cupids. Still enjoying this whole story, the plot, the character perspectives and all! I don't know how you did it but damn!

OH DAMN THIS CHAPTER WAS FUN

I think I forgot to mention my eternal love for Abby and her sense of humor! As usual, it's great.

But interesting, snakes.. I wonder if they have anything to do with a certain red head.

Ah yes, the gay gene, honestly that part had literally rolling on my side trying to quieten down my laughter! Damn, I really like Isaka.

I'm also really curious about Eveon eyes and her father. Can't wait to continue onwards!

That's right, when Ken first appeared and with the description of his eyes I thought he might be a demon and with this chapter I'm beginning to lean further towards that idea.

Damn anyway, this story is really addicting. Like, I just want to read it all and can't get enough. Your writing is good as well, it's neat and clean and just flows, really. I think you're doing a great job, and well yeah, of course the writing would be neat and clean and flow, you did mention this was a edit/improvement thingo!

Also, DAMN, I like your characters. So far they're different and fun but naturally, most of all, it is Isaka that I love. Damn, can't get enough of her and her antics and I absolutely love her reason for "kidnapping" Mina, perfect, wonderful, marvellous!

I honestly feel like Abby should've died. I'm not sure how there was even a hint of romance between her and Sakura. It feels as if the entire situation was a cop-out. You bring in Sakura, who just happens to be Tycara's mother. Tycara just happens to have grown on Abby like she was her daughter. Then you ahve Tycara's mom and Abby fall in love and have Abby give birth to Tycara. Abby wasn't exactly my favorite character, since she seemed to make waaaaaaaay too many lesbian jokes or sex jokes and I wouldn't have wished her to die prior to the moment she was fatally struck, but the events that happened afterwards just don't really seem real to me.

As for Krystal, I didn't like her too much at first because she seemed to flirt with Isaka at times, then confused about her own sexuality at others, then went back to flirting with Isaka. But, I realized as time went on that she was like the many people out there who deny their sexuality. She ended up being my favorite character in this series, even though she seems so pathetically weak most of the time.

You had me crying these last two eps. Great story, thank you.

Wow. This. I applaud you, for writing the first story that I have not been able to predict. This is how a story should be written, dragging the reader left and right into walls and through them, with surprise and great things on the other side. Well done. I shall wait for more!