Okay i just want to bang my head against this desk...

Reason why? Will today i just discovery that there is already a book with this same title! (my goal breaking now..)

So now i need to create a new title (sniff) if you guys are reading this will does "The beginning of the Zombie War" or "The start of the Zombie War" is good to use? I need help with the title please ASAP!

Ha .. Before i forget to mention to you, w're vampires .. lolz .. love that line

Pretty good. Needs a little work but it needs to have a bit more depth. Still very high potential. I like what I've read thus far. Keep up the good work.

Sincerely yours,

Javin S.S. Taylor Author of Scarlet Memories: The Hallowed Lost and winner of the 2011 young authors award