Reviews for Live
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Hi again. You're probably getting sick of me. :) Only 32 mins left of the RM though.

I like the defined structure of this poem because it really ties back to the concept of predetermination and fate and how concrete some (depending on beliefs, significant) aspects of our lives are. How there are things that simply cannot be changed, and therefore not deserving of being judged.

I don't like the lines [Some live for wealth, / Thinking only of themselves.] because they break the rhythmic pattern you'd built up in each other couplet.

Ohana from the Review Marathon (link in profile) chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Nope. I'll review, but I won't review. Nope. *screams and bangs head on desk repeatedly while telling myself that I suck at poetry compared to you*
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
That was very good, the message was clear.
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Very true. Amen, brotha!