Reviews for The Merentith Triolgy Book One: Radiant Shadows
1supergirl4 chapter 34 . 2/28/2013
I'm glad you updated again. Great job on the chapter and I can't wait for more! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 33 . 2/7/2013
I enjoyed this chapter and wonder what will happen next. Great job! I can't wait to read more! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 32 . 1/31/2013
I enjoyed the chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 31 . 1/25/2013
Another great chapter! I can't wait for more! :)
Oci Oceana chapter 31 . 1/25/2013
wow... really really cool chapter... write more please! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 30 . 1/17/2013
Another great chapter! I look forward to more! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 29 . 1/10/2013
I'm happy to see another update. Great job on this chapter! I can't wait to read more! :)
Mimzyfire chapter 28 . 1/7/2013
love it and im glad that you updated. Update soon please!
1supergirl4 chapter 28 . 12/6/2012
I'm glad you updated again. Wonderful job on the chapter! I can't wait to read more. :)
1supergirl4 chapter 27 . 11/16/2012
I'm glad you updated! This was a great chapter! Can't wait for more! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 26 . 11/8/2012
I enjoyed the new chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 25 . 11/2/2012
Great job once again! I can't wait for more! :)
1supergirl4 chapter 24 . 10/25/2012
Another great chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Complex Variable chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
[ But she often wondered, death would be better than the utter loneliness.] - - -why not add "if" or "whether" between "wondered" and "death"?

["This is as good as it's going to get," she muttered.] - - - why not add "I guess" at the beginning of the line of dialogue.

Interesting characterization; dreams as escapism is a nice theme, and, considering the brevity of the prologue, you do a good job of establishing a contrast between the solace Bailey finds in her dreams and the uncomfortable realities of her day-to-day life.
1supergirl4 chapter 23 . 10/18/2012
I enjoyed the chapter once again. Great job and I'm looking forward to the next one! :)
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