Nice beginning. She's kind of skittish.

Please just let us know if you are continuing with the story? I come here to check for an update like every month.

This is great and I wish it was updated

Please update...

Hi! I'm really enjoying this! I originally liked Alex... but now he seems a little overbearing and creepy. I can't wait to find out his secret!
Do you think you'll update again! I would honestly really love to read more :D

This is a great story, I know it's been updated a long time ago but you should continue! I love the way you tell everything and nothing at the same time. I know that Alexander is dangerous but how dangerous? He is hiding something but what? All those pretty women in his life, his daughter not telling Aaliyah the SECRET about her daddy, Fiona crying they won't let her go. That's what I want to find out! You need to continue that story somehow! Can't wait.

are you kidding me?! you left us on a cliffhanger?! Please continue, you have talent. Continue.

Not to be rude but I swear if u dnt fucking post another chapter I might just consider comitting suicide...this story is amazing and I can't stand that u havent posted in so long! Please post more!

Please please please update I have fallen in love with this story and im am DYING to know what alex is hiding!

Great story! Update?

OMG SOMEONE SLAP EARL!

Your chapters are brilliant. I'm looking forward to finding out what alexanders secret is. Please write more chapters soon!

Oooh...interesting story.

I had to do a double take, lol. I am so glad you updated this story. It is really good. What the devil does Alex do? It can't be good. He scared poor Fred to death; killed that one guy who Aaliyah knew, well at least I think he did. His little girl knows things that she can't tell Aaliyah, but only that her dad loves Aaliyah more than ever. The suspense of who Alex is, is killing me, lol. I hope Aaliyah keeps her promise and does not tell Alex about Fiona coming by, because based on Alex's record, he'll probably kill her too. But knowing Alex he probably has camera's or something in his condo. It seems he always knows what is going on with Aaliyah; so she doesn't have to tell about Fiona, because he probably already knows. What the hell did Aaliyah get herself into. She better take heed to her dream, as creepy as it was, and listen to Fiona. I cannot wait for the next update.

I am all tense waiting for the other shoe. Your story is full of mystery and suspense and I can't wait to know more. I hope a sort of happy ending is still in store for the poor girl.