Reviews for This is for you
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
You're lucky you had a friend, if even one friend to take care of you and love you like that. I loved the lines "the venom dripping off of my glares" and "I'm tired of the lies/the words that burn at my soul" the imagery and the emotion in these lines stood out to me and I'm trying to figure out why. This poem was great from beginning to end but these two lines... I don't know but their stuck with me. I love them.

Keep writing.
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
.. What a brutle poem... Sometimes I get depressed.. I sing a melody that belongs to the sea and I feel at ease I know it's weird..
blueagle246 chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Great poem, very depressing. It seems that Alyssa is a very good friend.
True Talker chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Again, I DON'T want anyone to kill themselves and I DON'T want anyone to die. I just want everyone and I do mean EVERYONE to be okay.
bowl of strawberries chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
wow, that was heart-wrenching and very well done.
theycallmetalljake chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
There will always be things worth fighting for
Sal VeRane chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Hey, listen. Suicide doesn't have to be the answer to your problems. Find something, anything, to live for. Life DOES get better. I know from experience. Please, don't give up just yet!
Doctor Alex chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Alysaa sounds like an amazing friend. 3

...Suicidal thoughts spread. Don't put her through that! Please!