|Reviews for Tao of Possum|
| SilenceInHonour chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
I love this! When I clicked on the link I didn't really know what to expect but this is written very, very well. It's probably my favourite poem of yours so far. There are some very nice lines in this, I especially like:
"Language and thought divide us;
all words separate us and the poem
you wish to write will never
be written unless you lie."
That's a very powerful sentence and flows brilliantly.
| Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
I had to read this a couple times to understand but when I did I thought this was kind of comical with a serious "I want to see what you see" perspective. I like the imagery of you trying to squeeze into the possums head to see what he sees and transitioning smoothly into his perspective. Then you transition back out of his view just as smoothly. Great skill!