Reviews for Medical Prevention
recycledpaper chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
The line "I've seen the future..." is really personalizing this poem beautifully. Great work !
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Painfully true. There are things in this world far worse than death. And all the people who try to cheat time are deluded. No one can do that. Time conquers all.

Nice work.
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Hmm, a very interesting and understandable poem.
Jenny Sue chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Really enjoyed this poem. Sometimes people do seem to go for quantity over quality when considering how good someone's life has been, but there are worse things than dying. I really liked the phrase 'shrinking one's life' for some reason. Anyhoo, nice job :)

-JB
YuePantera chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Very well written and definitely something we should all think about. Good work. X
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
This is raw and deep. I've often thought the same when it comes to death and growing old but I couldn't have written it as poetically as you. I keep saying it, but I just can't get over how clever you are at writing! Your style and everything is just inspiring. Needless to say, you have a fan. I'll be checking for more things from you!
thetabbykitteh chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Dark themed but actually quite good.

Kitty