Reviews for Through the Eyes of a Phoenix
avalonchick5 chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Hey :)

It seemed kind of philosophical, but I liked how it was in the phoenix's POV and how he thought so little of the treasure. It made me think about just how fickle we humans are. ;)

One critique: Literally halfway through the one-shot, the writing switches from present tense to past tense. Grammatically, that's rather bad form, for future reference.

An interesting little one-shot. Myself and Poozie (my fellow aspiring writer who is sitting next to me and reading along) like what we've read. :)

Keep writing!

Avalon and Poozie