Reviews for of course i worry sometimes
electrical moon chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Nice poem! I really enjoy reading this sort of dialogue poem. I'd like to see more imagery though (just a suggestion. I still liked it).
drizzelafterdawn chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
nice, and i think i know what you are trying to say and i agree with you. because life wont gave you chances again learn from your mistakes before its too late that you loose everything. i really like the composition of words nice work.