|Reviews for Lines Under|
| Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Awesome! Simply awesome! Though I do have to share one thing I noticed. The last stanza left me wanting more; like it was an incomplete sentence or something. Aside from that, excellent piece; there is a lot of emotion attached to it. Love it, keep it up! :)
As always, keep writing!
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Very nice and true. Keep it up .