Reviews for Corrosive
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
incredible. amazing. can't tell you how much i love this.
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This managed to tear me down and build me up at the same time. Amazing.

I love, love, love the "slashed like serpent eyes" simile. Sent a chill down my spine.
LM4E chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
WOW one of the best poems I've read on here. The imagery was sensational. It was all so sharp and tangent and I am tasting lemon in my mouth right now just LOOKING at the choice of words you used. Your phrases were also extremely vivid. "a grimace gashed upon my face" "swallow and sear into my throat the pungency lacing every word" Genius. This demanded so much attention. I have no criticism. This was perfect. Keep writing.