|Reviews for The Paranormal Side|
| Random reader chapter 3 . 6/29
Hi, enjoying the story so far. However it really throws a speed bump at the flow of the story to have so many misspelled words and grammatical errors. I.e. it is oops not opps, abandoned building not abandon building, and others. Perhaps a spell-check program would be in order. Other than that great character development, and use of imagery. Will continue reading.
| a99515 chapter 10 . 6/8/2013
you are doing fine just update this story.
| Randomology chapter 10 . 5/1/2013
Nice, I honestly thought i'd never see this thing get updated, but anyway the story is very intersting and I hope you continue with it.
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/5/2012
oh we'll stay around for you hope you get betterso that you can finish this wonderfull story.
| Ink splatterTron chapter 5 . 7/31/2012
Ohmygosh! Igra is adorable! Clueless, clueless.
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/16/2012
For some reason this story made me fist pump the air when I found it.
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/13/2012
This story is awsome sauce!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2012
Of course aliens are real it would make less sence if they were not.
| marcoolsen chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I'll say that this is one of the more interesting stories I've encountered here on FP. I've noticed a few errors, but I'll let it slide... Well, not really. You use 'of' instead of 'have' or something else many times. At first I thought it was an error, that only would happen once, but I guess it's got something to do with where you're from. It's a nice story, I like the idea behind plasma-carbon windows, and I still am a bit confused when Igra says that the only feelings his race has are those 3, but I'm so sure that he has others. It wouldn't surprise me either, if he developed feelings, akin to love, for Dibra.
Good story, needs furbishing, but I like how you describe it, both from Dibra's and Igra's point of view.
| KatieMichelle chapter 7 . 6/4/2012
Wow, you update a lot! That's so awesome xD
"Earth to Dibra" literally made me laugh out loud. It's just so ironic, it's beautiful :p
| cypress16 chapter 7 . 6/4/2012
Just a couple things, very good though!
getting in there groups. s/b: getting in (their) groups
you don't start play s/b: you don't start (to) play
Only other thing is maybe a few missing commas...I'm bad with them so I'm not the best judge...
Would Keith really 'rat-out' another kid in class? I would think that would get him 'social capital punishment' in the teen world.
Again, it's your story/world.
| cypress16 chapter 6 . 6/4/2012
This is the only small thing I noticed! Good job! Coo-does!
too cute to her boyfriend s/b: too cute to (be) her
In a real high school situation, she wouldn't been alone in a room with a person not on her school contact list. Someone would/should have stopped him and/or called 911 if he kicked in a classroom door. The school would have been on lock down before they made it to the front door. If it got that far, Tony would have lost his job letting them leave...
Now, after my little rant, you are writing a sci-fi story, so you can create your own world/situations. It's your story.
| KatieMichelle chapter 6 . 6/3/2012
Dude, I wish I got random free classes. Lucky Dibra and lucky Liz and lucky 's class.
Great chapter, as usual :p
| cypress16 chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
More little things,
as he walks out the factory s/b as he walks out of the
and make the fall look good s/b and makes the wall look good
He his another panel outside s/b He hits ? another panel
It's is unfurnished s/b It's unfurnished
I review my stories 5 and 6 times and still find things I missed.
Cops running away? Like I say it's your story...
Keep going. I like the tongue-in-cheek humor...
| cypress16 chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
More small things..
It seems to of understood... s/b It seems to have understood
as he looks at my amazed. s/b ? face? look?
your race is they're acceptable s/b your race is acceptable
just leave please in peace s/b just leave us in peace
something malfunction inside s/b something malfunctioning
will accept us as alleys s/b will accept us as allies
who can't right there way s/b who can't fight their way
shipped from there from other s/b shipped there from other
I liked the humor, I actually chuckled out loud...
"I wanted to meet an alien! Not kiss an alien!"