aw, that was so sad. . . :( It was good,poignant. I quite liked it. :3

Aw! Romantic and sad! Again I am reduced to wondering how you come up with such marvelous poems! Speechless once more!

An exquisite piece! Keep it up! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni

This is so sweet and sad at the same time, I wish I could write as good as this (:

Really beautiful poem. I loved the line 'Enveloped by the sea like a long lost friend' :)

Good job, I could feel the emotion in this piece

This is a brilliant piece of writing, I have to say this touched my heart, with the level of emotion I felt radiating from this. Please continue writing to your fullest and never give up)

That is such a lovely sad story. The imagery is great- particularly about the storm- as well as it being actually happening, it is saying what's going on inside her (a battle to get the courage enough to jump in).

Like with everything you write, it is filled with beautiful imagery that captures the purpose/story you're writing. I love your style of writing and also this piece.

Beautiful imagery as always :)

Aww that was romantic and sad. You always paint a magical picture in my head. Wonderful job. :-)

A unique and beautifully written piece, I say! I loved the pictures that you tried to transport and the perspective. Keep writing! :)

Wow... that was deep. I really enjoyed it. You know what? I'm gonna favorite this! I'm a hopeless romantic, so... Um, yeah. Thanks for such an awesome story!