Reviews for Unsaid
professional griefer chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Very nice ficlet.

Touching, you convey the emotion very well. I don't really see anything wrong with it. A bit confused as to why the line is there...is it both of them, one after another? You made that kind of confusing and unclear by not giving either of them names.

Other than that, great work!
Phsychic chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Wow, that's so inspirational, and so true to life! I love it and I can't believe I found something that reflects so true to my own situation. . . thank you so much for publishing that!