|Reviews for Wolfy Instincts|
| crissy19 chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
wow intense chapter, cant wait til the next one
| JA chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
Do not like him one bit. But Avery's reaction was just what I would expect of him. Anubis is so sweet. Why do I feel he's not a normal dog. Still love your story. Keep up the good work
Xoxo JA Xoxo
| iCY the Polar Kid chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
I have a feeling we'll probably be seeing more of Kenley. No?
Interesting chapter but man Avery is so wolfy heh. He's a rather difficult character to decipher mainly because I dot know whether to hate him for acting impulsively or love him for being Avery, heh. Either way. I am really liking everything about this story so far, plot, characters, etc.
So keep it up and keep it real!
And yes this is iCY, heh. Finally decided to login
| Rebel Dove chapter 8 . 8/24/2012
I think this story is progressing fairly well, but something is missing. I guess maybe I want her to have some reason to like Avery. So far all he seems to do is make her angry or scared. And I don't mean get her flowers or anything bit say something that makes her heart flutter. Does that make sense? Don't get me wrong, I really like it and look forward to updates! And Kenley, I am so looking forward to move of his character!
| MaidInFrance chapter 8 . 8/24/2012
Omg...wth she had no right to be crying...she was the idiot who let that stranger in..the dog wasn't freaking out for no reason !
| Roxyflipflop chapter 8 . 8/24/2012
This story is so good! I know you have school and all that jazz... But post again as soon as possible!
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/24/2012
great chapter cant wait to read more
| GreysonDrew chapter 7 . 8/21/2012
Good chapter all in all.
Although, I did spot a couple of errors :/
| Hayley Jade Alisdair chapter 7 . 8/20/2012
Loving the story so far and Jay's independence :). Can't wait to see where you take this, looking forward to your next update :)
| Grape chapter 7 . 8/16/2012
I was very excited about the update! Thank you! Loved the chapter, so adorable! I'm glad Avery punched Daniel in the face! Ha ha!
| mydreamadventure chapter 7 . 8/16/2012
this is truly a great book, the plot the characters are all just intriguing! i love it keep it up!
| Well done chapter 7 . 8/13/2012
I have to say, I really like this. It kind of reminds me of twilight in some places, but it's different enough that that doesn't matter. I can't wait to hear about Anubis, and find out about him. :) Update soon, please!
| iCY chapter 7 . 8/13/2012
Heh. Sweet! Another amazing update.
And sorry about that... I do actually have an account on here. I just tend to get lazy and don't log in, xD
I do have this story on favs and alert, that's why I know when it gets updated, heh.
But yes I do check up on it too when I don't feel like checking emails for updates :D
Great chapter. The only error I found was a very minor one... here:
"I don't want to hear rumors about or latest conquest."
I think you mean "your latest conquest" right...?
Well just in case that's what you meant. If not then you can totally ignore that, heh.
I have a feel that David guy is going to appear a little more often in the future... and that dog! Heh. Anubis xD I wonder if she's really going to settle for that name. Hopefully it's not a were in disguise because it really does sound like a sweet dog! And her dad's super chill with it too, heh, which is awesome.
Avery can be super possessive at times which makes it... how do you put it... a downer? Makes you wonder why you even like him at times xD
Well of course he can be cool at times but man... a majority of the time... he's so, Avery, heh. Still like his character though, just because he's him.
And Jay's becoming a kickass gal, even awesomer. :)
Hopefully she can actually stand up to Avery himself one day, heh. Even if it's just for kicks and giggles.
Anyways. I can't wait to see what else you have in stores for us with this story. Keep up the awesomeness. You are on a roll here.
| JA chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
I liked this chapter. I think it was great how you showed that Jay could look after her self. I also love the dog he seams so cute. Keep up the good work.
Xoxo JA Xoxo
| purple-wolf-howl chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
Hi! Wow to see how this story grew so much in such a little time! I'm been reading this when you put in Avery's POV and to see how it evolved is wonderful! I love this story! Update soon!