Reviews for are you happy?
AuroraBorealis99 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
wow. Just, wow. hard-hitting, powerful and bold.

In one simple strophe, you've conveyed a whole world of emotion. I really feel like the poem is jumping off the page and speaking directly to me. I especially love how detached 'now' is from the rest of the poem - the hypothetical future, far off in time suddenly brought sharply into the present with the simple word 'now'. Great stuff!
PhonixBird chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
good one! The title is ok(Try a different one, i think, but to each his own) and the end is a bit confusing but good poem, and strong moral message. Keep writing!
surelynot chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
A very powerful and beautifully jarring poem. I really love it. I also love the title and summary! Well done.
Ana Reyes chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Wonderfuly written!
my.life.is.over chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
You're writing gets better and better. Keep it up.