What I hate is that Wyatt chose his 4-5 month relationship with Nolan over his umpteenth years of friendship with Bennett. I hate people like that. Therefore I extremely dislike Wyatt even though he is entitled to be royally pissed off with Bennett.

Woah. Micah was funny and too adorable, my favorite character. I wish he would end up with Bennet but I need to continue reading.

I think him not getting it up is stupid. He was straight before and then suddenly he can't have sex? As far as I know your body reacts just by thinking about sex.

Woah! Bennett has anger management issues. I mean, break up with the guy, absolutely, but beat the shit out of him too? That's unnecessary

I really like this story even if there are a lots of things that I'm not agree (like the cheat or else) :D And excuse my bad english 'cause I'm French

À plus tard peut-être

I thought that i had read your fiction once and stopped in the middle. I'm not comfortable reading materials with people rebounding left and right. But now I have different perception. And really glad for Bennett and everyone else to break their bad habit, except Gary.. i know how hard it is.. so a step away and further away felt like novel experience that also felt liberating.
congratulation.
i wish you well.

Beautiful conclusion. Thank you!

Loved the story but absolutely hated the ending. Nolan and Ben didn't even sort out their problems? They hadn't seen each other in 4 years and Nolan proposes? I liked Ben and Micah WAYYY better. But that's just me! Your writing is really good btw, I'm gonna go read some of your other stories now

I got so obsessed with this story that I finished it in like, 3 days, reading nonstop! I freaking loved it sooooo much! The plot was amazing and I just fell in love with the characters! Amazing story you have here, and I am happy that I came across it! Excellent job!

Yepp, I definitely liked that epilogue, and it was worth getting to. :) I know I've seemed complain-y through this, but I did like it. Yes, there are bumps and links that need to be smoothed out, but I still think you have a nice story. (Believe me, I have a habit of walking out on stories part-way through when they aren't interesting or going in a way I can live with.) Your story is cute, despite the sadness, and I liked Bennett. He was a real character, and I appreciate that a lot in a story. Good luck with any others you have in the future!

Uhh, okay. That was definitely...sudden. And random. I'm happy things between Nolan and Bennett worked out, but they hadn't seen each other in 4 years and now in 2 minutes they're engaged and everything is perfect? Am I the only one who finds that odd?
So I'm assuming Wyatt and Micah end up together? Also, with Micah having deleted Ben's number, how are they all good and happy and friends again? With a story, it's fine to have unexpected things happen, but you still have to explain so much. Everything randomly falling into place just doesn't work, and author's notes don't count.
There is one more chapter, though, so I'm off to see what that's about!

My reaction to that last sentence: EXCUUUUUUSSE me?! What is WITH that guy? He was /never/ this rude, inconsiderate, and cocky before? What the hell happened?!

I still don't entirely get Micah..and I never stopped liking Bennett, but I get what you were going for. For once, i reeeeeaally disliked Nolan's perspective and found it majorly douche-baggy, but I still think you're beginning to clear up those character problems I complained about before (-"). Considering my coincidental run in with one just a few minutes ago, I have to disagree about cockroaches being wonderful, but I'm still glad Micah is moving on and getting something for himself. :)

If I were in Micah's place? Ah, no, no I wouldn't. Hell, my relationship with my sister isn't even that abusive and I'd probably laugh a little before trying to make the person leave. Then I'd feel guilty but the righteousness would largely overpower that. But then, I'm probably no where near as good of a person.
And, okay, Nolan sounded a bit more like himself with that one. But...we'll see how things go. Hopefully not too crazy for much longer.

Okay, I know I haven't left a review before, but honestly, this story has me kind of...confused. For starters, Nolan's attitude has me all kinds, especially. He isn't matching up. From his perspective, the way he's acting doesn't fit. I get him being caught up in feeling over Ben, but him cheating doesn't fit. And he put considerably more effort into Wyatt (whom, btw, had a terrible exit) when his interest was flagging than he is in Ben who he seemed to like and care about more. And now he's just shutting him out? It's just so.../wrong/. I get Ben is gonna end up with Micah, and even that relationship doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I like that he's at least using his anger and funneling it usefully, even if he doesn't realize how much. I just..ugh, I'm so conflicted about everything. You definitely have an interesting story going for you, though, I can say that much.