Eh I can't get behind it. Their betrayal of Wyatt is wrong and I think Bennett's "turn" happened too quickly.

Uh, what rules?

\*O*/ Finally finished this beautiful story! A while ago I stopped reading this at one point, when Wyatt left the house. This story sure did confuse me.. it made me sad and then happy again. Lol, And last night I started reading from where I stopped, chapter 25. And in less than 24 hours, I finished the whole story. I was so excited to read it. And now I shall miss them. :') I haven't enjoyed a good story in so long. And I'm so glad this story didn't leave me hanging without any happy ending. I really liked Bennett btw. w So thank you lots for writing this story. And the last part is about to make me tear up. I shall not give up in life...

I'm sad...only not because the story is over but because pretty much anything I wanted to happen was ripped out from right under me. I think the most frustrating thing is that in the beginning I actually wanted Nolan and Bennett together but then you turned Nolen into an asshole instead of just confused and he probably should have gone to therapy before proposing lol. Also I wouldn't have minded Micah and Wyatt ending up together if I hadn't lost all respect for Wyatt when he kept having sex with Nolan to try and save their dying relationship instead of for love. Also I think it's unrealistic that all these men can't turn down sex with EVERYBODY instead of just the one they're in love with (I'm a romance book, happy ending kind of girl). Well now that I've got that out there I want to end on a positive note. I think you are a very good and talented writer..even though the story didn't go the way I wanted it to ;)

Sutekie

Okay so I just started reading this story yesterday. I was going to wait to leave a review at the end since the story is complete but for this chapter I can't resist. So basically I just wanted to say that even though this is fiction it bothers me that Wyatt and Nolan are both acting like idiots for not breaking up with each other. I get that Wyatt is in love and all but he's an idiot (not for trying to work things out with Nolan). But because he thinks having sex with Nolan will actually fix the situation. Nolan is an idiot because when you are in a relationship and then fall in love with someone else and cheat with that person. It's not because your a cheater it is because you are not really meant to be with the person your with. If you were really in love with them then you wouldn't fall in love with another (in my opinion). P.S Sorry for such a looong review lol.

Sutekie

Oh well, this is sad to read, but I know you could have made it more painful, so I won't condemn you. And since I never really got to like Nolan too much I guess that now I'm excited for what may happen between Micah and Bennet. But again, please don't be to terrible on poor Wyatt. I really like the guy! He's kind of sweet. Then again, I just love Micah.
Hoping you'll update soon...
-A

It really was inevitable. They were hot together but that never lasts. What I was disappointed about in this chapter is that you have introduced a character: Scarlet, and have not mentioned her at all during the split. Whilst I know the story revolves primarily around Bennett and Nolan Scarlet seems to be simply an accessory.
Plus, this is a sequel right? Why haven't you begun a new story instead of tagging it on the end of here? This isn't a criticism. I just think you are selling yourself short if you simply tag this on the end of the previous story. This is the next stage in Bennett/Nolan/Micah's story and surely deserves its own space don't you think? I am looking forward to what will happen next though. Whilst I don't want Micah to be a hopeless rebound I get the feeling he won't be able to resist now that Bennett is all available and vulnerable. Plus I always thought they should be together anyway, but that's just me getting too involved with your characters. That just goes to prove how well they are written.

DS

Wow - talk about whiplash! I guess Nolan didn't confront Bennett about the "sleep-over" with Micah and Bennett didn't ask about where Nolan went the night of the funeral or the next either...I hate this. But, I know you're the writer and I really hope it's not the end of them. They worked so hard to get to this point.

You just love to torture your readers, don't you.

My prediction: Bennett and Nolan don't get back together, Bennett actually gets together with Micah

Because you want to please fans of both "ships".

Blah. I'll wait til you finish this for good to see who you end of pairing Bennett with.. If he ends up with anyone at all.

Oh how could you! Lol you can't leave it a cliffhanger! :0

Awwwww no Micah! I can tell someone is not gonna have a happy ending.

What Micah said at the end its totally fucking true!

Are you going to continue?
please continue!

Ok, I have to say I LOVE this story. I love Wyatt and Micah. I STILL don't like Nolan.. Sorry but I think he was an idiot from the beginning. Sure, he seems all sweet and sensible, but I still don't trust him. I mean, I liked him well enough at the beginning, but the he turned into a jerk, and I just haven't come around to like him again. I really wanted Ben and Micah's relationship to work out. *sighs* Micah is just AMAZING.
And honestly I hope you won't keep hurting poor Wyatt, I mean the guy is really nice.
And I really hope you won't turn Ben into a cheating idiot who will hurt Micah in the future. I really like Ben, even though I hated that he couldn't make his mind up about dumping Nolan.
Anyway, I hope you'll keep writing about these guys long time. I just love the whole story, the characters and their interactions.

Oh, poor Wyatt... :(