Reviews for Four Dreamers
TeaAndCakes chapter 13 . 9/18/2012
Nice chappy :)
Like the mystery happenin' ;)

P.S please send le criteria for le editing of the next chappies for TLFoH, please! ;) via e-mail, please!
sacredflame778 chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
I like this so far. However, I would appreciate if the environments were described a bit more. What is this place like? However, I do get the overall gist of the culture. It's like a slightly different version of Avatar.
King of Magic chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Great work, I'm pretty impressed by the whole thing! I like how the world is formed. Also, try not to say things the reader can figure out for themselves, or things that would sound weird from that character, eg A Mistress of Water calling her pupil a 'Pupil of Water'. Good luck with future writing!
TeaAndCakes chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
oOo :D Nice work fantasyfreak123 -

Try to make the chapters just a bit longer and try to use more pronouns to replace all the 'Melaras' ok? :)

Update soon! -
TeaAndCakes chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Nice story fantasyfreak123 :)

Update soon!

Oh and love the story cover -
Frost Glaive chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
hey waterbenderchick (btw i like waterbenders too)

thanks for the reviews! :)

also they can also be called simply 'Tears', 'Flames', 'Powers', etc.
WaTeRbEnDerCHiCk chapter 3 . 6/1/2012
Once again wow :)

but also once again..

"Flame of Fire"

Hmm...sounds too formal and long..

Update soon!
WaTeRbEnDerCHiCk chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
I like the story :) but:

"Pupil of Water"

"Tear of the water"

"Powers of the Elements"

hmmm...they may be a little...i don't know...too long?

The rankings such as "tear of the Water" should be little simpler but otherwise, it's a good story so far :)

"Prince Chermont" -I LOVE THE NAME ;D

Update soon! :)