|Reviews for Four Dreamers|
| TeaAndCakes chapter 13 . 9/18/2012
Nice chappy :)
Like the mystery happenin' ;)
P.S please send le criteria for le editing of the next chappies for TLFoH, please! ;) via e-mail, please!
| sacredflame778 chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
I like this so far. However, I would appreciate if the environments were described a bit more. What is this place like? However, I do get the overall gist of the culture. It's like a slightly different version of Avatar.
| King of Magic chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Great work, I'm pretty impressed by the whole thing! I like how the world is formed. Also, try not to say things the reader can figure out for themselves, or things that would sound weird from that character, eg A Mistress of Water calling her pupil a 'Pupil of Water'. Good luck with future writing!
| TeaAndCakes chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
oOo :D Nice work fantasyfreak123 -
Try to make the chapters just a bit longer and try to use more pronouns to replace all the 'Melaras' ok? :)
Update soon! -
| TeaAndCakes chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Nice story fantasyfreak123 :)
Oh and love the story cover -
| Frost Glaive chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
hey waterbenderchick (btw i like waterbenders too)
thanks for the reviews! :)
also they can also be called simply 'Tears', 'Flames', 'Powers', etc.
| WaTeRbEnDerCHiCk chapter 3 . 6/1/2012
Once again wow :)
but also once again..
"Flame of Fire"
Hmm...sounds too formal and long..
| WaTeRbEnDerCHiCk chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
I like the story :) but:
"Pupil of Water"
"Tear of the water"
"Powers of the Elements"
hmmm...they may be a little...i don't know...too long?
The rankings such as "tear of the Water" should be little simpler but otherwise, it's a good story so far :)
"Prince Chermont" -I LOVE THE NAME ;D
Update soon! :)